Would this be a long enough app you think?

[Contest]

Well, I applied for Serenity on HF. The group.

Here's the app. Do you think it's long enough?

Well, as you see, I'm putting in an application because I'm interested. I think I'd be a nice addition to this group because I like to debate/argu. I find it very amusing actually. I also want to join this group because I can put up quite an argument/debate. I can debate on numerous things like weed, bronies, gaming, etc. I have debated on other threads also. I've debated about bronies with JustHayden on UziGaming. I just find debating to be fun. Also, I don't really have any other group to join except this one because, well, you know, I like to debate on numerous things. I think I'd be a nice addition to this group and I would defiantly be excited to join. Well, this is my app to join.

Well, yeah. Yes, no, maybe so?

 

[Mxlitary]

The application is very...fluffy. You said a lot of unnecessary things and you repeated yourself multiple times. You should find other reasons why you should be allowed in the group. For example, try to find examples of you debating.