Thread Design

[Doom]

This is my first ever thread design.
Warning: I DID copy some ideas from other threads.

 

[Twix]

This is my first ever thread design.
Warning: I DID copy some ideas from other threads.

what's up. Pm me if u do deals . I'm new so yah..

 

[Fresh]

what's up. Pm me if u do deals . I'm new so yah..

Bro, Stop putting ...... After everything, Also no need to Quote the main thread you can just reply.

 

[Doom]

Ahem? I'd like some suggestions on how to improve this, @"Fresh" and @"Twix".

 

[Fresh]

Maybe you could put pictures or glow something to make the packages you offer stand out.

 

[Glitter Milk]

I like the thread design, especially for being your first.
The font could use some work, the shadow is good, it really depends on what the layout is for in regards to how many sections. The Contact icons could be a bit smaller;

All in all it's pretty simple, clean, organized 8/10 for you kind sir.

 

[Tempts]

Its quite bland, you said its your first so I'm not going to critique too much of the minor things, but I'll let you know what I think could go a long way.


1. A pattern, gradient, or noise, putting something on the background would add some detail, and make it look less flat

2. Layer Styles. Again, adding proper layer styles would help the text, dividers, etc. Stand out

3. Font Choice, I'm not a huge fan of the font on this layout, but of course that's all personal preference.

Overall 6/10