This Quote?

[Jupi]

So I just made this quote up last night. But I feel like it could be revised better, can anyone think of anything?

s/o
@Random
@Towel
@Wwe
@Magic

My actions and words are something your eyes and ears cannot decipher

 

[Random]

Please Fix The Capitalization Mate, Its Horrid On The Eyes.

Thanks.

 

[Magic]

'My actions and words are something your eyes and ears can't comprehend' - try that.

 

[Pandas]

Fuck her right in the pussy. 

Thanks for the grammys. 

 

[cruz]

Pretty nice, Just fix cap other than that perfect

 

[Space Time]

"You endeavour to analyze my actions and words but you merely touch the surface"
I actually don't know LOL

 

[Random]

Too much "and" it messes up the flow.

 

[NoTez]

'My actions and words are something your eyes and ears can't comprehend' - try that.

That's a better version and looks very professional.

 

[Magic]

@Random your right
@Hansel go with something more like this, 'My actions are of such royalty that you simply cannot comprehend them' or My actions are something your eyes cannot comprehend.
@Nokia skip to 0:16 [video=youtube]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6w1DsOA-1pM[/video]

 

[NoTez]

My actions and words are something your eyes can't interpret/elucidate.

 

[Radical]

My actions and words are something your eyes can't interpret/elucidate.

A quote doesn't have to have advanced words to make it sound good. And I can't tell if you are saying (in/el) to choose both or just one.

 

[Lame123]

try drinking bleach, this might help the flow.