Slash Signature Rate

[J‌‌‌_mybb_import10332]

Hey guys.
What so you think of this?

 

[J4mmy]

It's certainly too bright, you should add few darker spots here and there. Also you should make your focal points (Slash) more colored, so to speak as now it's barely visible. Also the text doesn't fit into the image at all.

 

[Sockatobi]

Like J4mmy said, I think you need to make slash sharper. I feel that it's too busy around him. He should be the first thing that I notice, but he wasn't.

 

[bcfcAnt]

I think that this is quite a decent tag to be fair but as said above, you need to add more focus to the render and I think you should add some depth.

Keep up the work!