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just did this a few minutes ago... it isn't that great so it would be useful if you could tell me a few good things and a few bad things i did

i didn't do much in the tag, kept it simple and clean

here it goes


Original:
version0.gif


Version 1:
version1.gif


Version 2:
version2n.gif

Version 2-edited :
version2lightsourced.gif

added light on the focal and smudged the egdes
Version 2-focused :
version2focused.gif

blurred the background a little here

any CnCs welcomed, :)
 
My Fav would be V2 the others are too dark for me the good things would be focal placement and bad things would be a few too much smudging if that's the effect you used and no lighting.
 
I don't really like them if I'm honest, sorry but to be fair though the middle one looks best out of all of them.
 
thanks legokiba213, i have been having a problem with lighting effects so i am trying to cut that out

a simple trick was told to me a long back is to make the edges darker, so i left a whole space there
was that right or wrong?
how to make a lighting source?
 
I like to make a new layer take a 100px soft brush choose white as foreground color then lower the opacity. Next make a new layer same brush this time use a yellow foreground set layer to overlay lower opacity and a nice light should appear. there is also such thing as natural lighting and sometimes you don't need lighting also choose a good spot for lighting don't just place it anywhere.

Here is a good tut if I wasn't clear. http://forums2.battleon.com/f/tm.asp?m=3516337
 
yea, i know that method... i have been told about it as well (i needed a lot of help about flow and light source in an older gfx forum) the tutorial you showed is great, thanks!
 
working on it right now, keep checking as i will edit it in order to avoid a double post
 
okay, should version 2 - light-sourced be lighted some more? didn't want to make it noticeable-much
 
I would suggest a little more but it is the best one so far. Also, Try clearing up some effects on her face.
 
okay, will add a little more

about the face...its just coming on her cheeks, the other lines are actually her face
 
alright, thanks for informing me... will try to increase the light source next time
 
I agree about the light source. I didn't like it though, to be honest. It's just.. not my type.
 
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