Quiet

[Xypher]

 

[Robbieava]

HI I'M ROB AND I LIKE TO YELL.

This isn't that bad, it seems real techy, the only thing I don't really like is the 3 lines at the top.

 

[Xypher]

Yeah the three lines were kind of a random thing I added into it.

 

[Robbieava]

If you're going to keep them, erase them off the head, and make it like in the BG, not overlapping her face.

 

[Xypher]

Updated, I can't move it behind as it's a stock.

 

[Robbieava]

Looking better man

 

[Xypher]

Fucking smilies need to work.

 

[Robbieava]

Indeed, you should get on that

 

[Xypher]

Eh, yeah I probably should...

 

[HurrDurrrr]

Updated, I can't move it behind as it's a stock.

The eraser tool is your friend. ^^
Looks very nice though.

 

[Xypher]

Problem is the hair, since there are openings in between the hair, I don't have the steady hand to do it properly.

 

[HurrDurrrr]

It's quite a small piece so people wouldn't notice about the really small things,

 

[Xypher]

Hm, I might give it a shot later then.

 

[Robbieava]

Kind of reminds me of some sort of gaming thing or something on a magazine I'd see.

 

[Abstract]

Lighting here is pretty good, however I'm not a fan of the background as it's just a solid color. I think you should expand the size of your signatures. Text could use some work, but it looks fine where it's placed.

 

[Xypher]

I would change the background if I was good with stock manipulation or rendering. Originally I didn't have text in this, but then I decided to add some after someone made a sig request. They wanted a dark themed one, this fit it, but they chose someone else'.