Poem #3

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Poison

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Hey guys,

This is a third edition to my series of poems I would like to make public. Let me know what you guys thing. Also, you will not be able to find this on Google, because I typed it on here. :)

*Please no rude judgement. If you flame me, you will get a flame ball to the face, and I am sure not just by myself.

-I created this poem for my ex-girlfriend. She was everything to me, and more. I still have yet to give this to her...

I've loved you forever
Even though I didn't know your name
I always knew I'd find you
You've been with me always
You will forever be my love.

You came into my life
and took me by surprise
It didn't take long
I knew it wouldn't

Your soft smile and gentle touch
Your loving heart and giving soul
Mean so much to me
and they always will.

Ours has to be a secret
and I surely wish it wasn't
Somehow that's not right
Yet, I know it has to be
You will forever be my love.

No words can express
all that I want to share
you are my world of dreams
You'll never know how much I care.

I'd do for you
what I'd do for few
You've done for me
What I never thought I'd see.

Whether near or far
Nothing can erase the moment's we've shared
No one can take you from me
Even if they try.
You will forever be my love.

You're a part of me now
my happiness and sadness too
You're in my heart and in my soul
Never to be forgotten

The time has come for us to part
You'll go your way and I'll go mine
How will I ever live without you?
I'll have to find the way
But through it all
Make no mistake, my darling
You will forever be my love.

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This one is my favorite so far, keep this sheet up man.
 
Copy-Paste much? Lol. "this is my Second Edition".

Very nice poem though.
 
wow this is a great poem i like this one the best keep it up your a good writer
 
Poison said:
I copy and paste it so I waste less time writing the bullshit and get to writing the poem itself.
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I know. I was just teasing you haha.
 
Poison said:
Tis all good man. Thanks for reading. Any feedback is appreciated. (of course not negative)
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This poem is complete shit bro! Just kys already seriously. You are the fucking worst at poetry.

JK lmao.
No but seriously, this poem is the prime d0pe.
 
Never give it to her, I'm serious bro resist that temptation. I'm not saying it's not good, it's great, but yeah no don't do it bro!
 
This was great Poison! Keep up the great work bae <3
 
Cann!bal said:
The rhyme and general pattern of this poem is dreadful. I liked the rawness of the poem, however, it's void of many poetic elements. I hope to see some improvement on your next edition.
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For some reason, it seems like you don't like any of my work...
 
Id like to respond to this thread in a freestyle poem dedicated to OP.

I've been thirsty for days
My brain is a constant haze
Oh the thirst is real

I feel like im lost in a desert waiting for you
I want you to cover my peach fuzz in cool soft cum
We can drink to our love and toast with rum all night long
I wish i could be with you

Quench my thirst
It hurts so bad and i know its not a phase or a fad
When i gaze into your eyes from a cross math class
I want to bend you over and fuck you in the ass
 
I like it bro, definitely keep it up!
 
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