Phhoenix said:Copy-Paste much? Lol. "this is my Second Edition".
Very nice poem though.
Poison said:I copy and paste it so I waste less time writing the bullshit and get to writing the poem itself.
Phhoenix said:I know. I was just teasing you haha.
This poem is complete shit bro! Just kys already seriously. You are the fucking worst at poetry.Poison said:Tis all good man. Thanks for reading. Any feedback is appreciated. (of course not negative)
My favorite partI'd do for you
what I'd do for few
You've done for me
What I never thought I'd see.
Cann!bal said:The rhyme and general pattern of this poem is dreadful. I liked the rawness of the poem, however, it's void of many poetic elements. I hope to see some improvement on your next edition.
Poison said:For some reason, it seems like you don't like any of my work...
Cann!bal said:I do like your work. I enjoy all poetry. I critique yours critically so it can be better.
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