My New youtube Intro

[Cred]

What do you guys think of my brand new youtube intro. Entirely made by me.
Render done in Cinema 4D, Effects in After Effects.

[video=youtube]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pY2akW07Xak&list=UUpAMKA1UwnIxlT20YQcORZA&index=1[/video]

 

[Profanity]

Didn't like how the text came in but the sound effects and background effects were nicely done!

 

[Cred]

Didn't like how the text came in but the sound effects and background effects were nicely done!

Why don't you like it? Any feedback would be helpful.

 

[Doom]

It's nice. I don't really like the look of the text and the ending is a bit long.

 

[ArmyyNEVERDIES]

It's nice. work on the text and the song

 

[Dolphins]

It looks kind of sick man. I like it.

 

[Tempts]

Work on keeping the animation moving, also IMO the particles were a bit TOO white. Not a fan of the shockwave style intro, but that's personal preference I guess.


Overall 7/10

 

[Profanity]

Why don't you like it? Any feedback would be helpful.

Just thought it was too dull. Disliked the font chosen as well.

 

[Epidemic]

I like it, could be improved overall. 7.5/10.