My Cousin's New Rap. Tell Me What You Think!

[Zeller]

My cousin came out with a new rap yesterday. It's pretty good to me. He needs feedback if its good or if there is anything he can change. Thanks! 

WARNING: The rap contains strong language!

https://soundcloud.com/tblowflow/let-me-introduct-myself-mix-01​

 

[FredoSantana]

Shit sounds pretty much like fire yo good shit.

 

[Zeller]

Shit sounds pretty much like fire yo good shit.

[font=Tahoma, Verdana, Arial, sans-serif]I will tell him that. Thanks for the feedback! [/font]​

 

[$crim]

It needs to be mixed better (Vocals & beat). But other than that, it's super fire. I'm going to be bumpin this .

 

[Gen]

This actually sounds pretty good man, tell your cousin to keep it up.

 

[Zeller]

@Exodia & @Rae

Thanks for the feedback, I will tell him later today!​

 

[SickestBeatZz]

OMG!! That nigga a god, and the beat clean asf. Everything fall threw so smoothly

 

[JohnnyG]

Honestly, it's not terrible. But it's not good by any means. Needs to switch up the flow and stop being so monotone.

 

[Keep]

He's doing something right, not to bad.