is this a wrong grammar?

[meriamg27]

hi good day is this a wrong grammar?
"wow seems like im a star everyone obsess to make a gossip about me, well just letting you know that im not affected and no matter how they drag me down i swear i will remain stands.

what do you think guys? .my friend put that on her facebook wall and one of her friend put a comment on her status that, that's a wrong grammar.for me it's a correct one my friend ask me if this is a wrong grammar or not .im not very particular of a grammar as long as it is understanble and readable that's not a big deal for me.she felt shy because she was embarrased i think her friend is very perfectionist because how can she say that it is a wrong grammar if she is not.what do you think guys is that wrong grammar?if wrong anyone can help to make it right. thanks for your input.
i analyzed the sentences i think this is the correct one
"wow seems like i'm a star everyone is obsess to make a gossip about me, well, just letting them know that im not affected and no matter how hard they try to drag me but i iswear im still remain standing.

thanks to everyone who will shares their thoughts about this matter.

 

[belleangelbelle]

I am not also care about grammar that's why I didn't noticed it at first time i read it. But when I try to read it again and check the grammar I may say that yes some grammars are incorrect. Maybe her friend is really good in grammar that's why she noticed it.

 

[meriamg27]

I am not also care about grammar that's why I didn't noticed it at first time i read it. But when I try to read it again and check the grammar I may say that yes some grammars are incorrect. Maybe her friend is really good in grammar that's why she noticed it.

hi good day thanks for dropping in my thread, thanks for sharing your opinion can you tell which of the sentences are incorrect? and what should be the right grammar? i'm not good in grammar too that's why im curious what is the correct one.

 

[polarbeer]

hi good day is this a wrong grammar?
"wow seems like im a star everyone obsess to make a gossip about me, well just letting you know that im not affected and no matter how they drag me down i swear i will remain stands.

what do you think guys? .my friend put that on her facebook wall and one of her friend put a comment on her status that, that's a wrong grammar.for me it's a correct one my friend ask me if this is a wrong grammar or not .im not very particular of a grammar as long as it is understanble and readable that's not a big deal for me.she felt shy because she was embarrased i think her friend is very perfectionist because how can she say that it is a wrong grammar if she is not.

I can see some grammar errors but I can perfectly understand what the author wants to convey. As long as she's not going to use that paragraph in a presentation, or it's not something she's going to use in a job application then it's fine.

 

[darrrling]

hi good day is this a wrong grammar?
"wow seems like im a star everyone obsess to make a gossip about me, well just letting you know that im not affected and no matter how they drag me down i swear i will remain stands.

what do you think guys? .my friend put that on her facebook wall and one of her friend put a comment on her status that, that's a wrong grammar.for me it's a correct one my friend ask me if this is a wrong grammar or not .im not very particular of a grammar as long as it is understanble and readable that's not a big deal for me.she felt shy because she was embarrased i think her friend is very perfectionist because how can she say that it is a wrong grammar if she is not.what do you think guys is that wrong grammar?if wrong anyone can help to make it right. thanks for your input.

Honestly, there are some errors in the post that she made on her facebook wall but it's understandable and you're right it's not a big deal. Especially if english is not your first language.

 

[suny]

Don't you worry about your grammar as long as you are not appearing in a grammar contest. Because this is not your mother tongue neither is mine so mistakes are bound to happen and we all learn from them. So just keep on doing your work and let the site owners/admin decide that. Cheers.

 

[belleangelbelle]

hi good day thanks for dropping in my thread, thanks for sharing your opinion can you tell which of the sentences are incorrect? and what should be the right grammar? i'm not good in grammar too that's why im curious what is the correct one.

To be honest. I am not really good in grammar too but I really think there were some errors but I don't want to point it out because I am also not sure of it. Maybe you can ask some other who post here. :Laugh: I'm not really confident in my grammar that why I don't want to correct it. Hope you understand.