Graphics Opinions ASAP.

[Homie]

I'm like two hours into my 10 hour Graphic controlled assessment, and I need some opinions on this please, because I feel like there is some shit missing.

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[Jaii]

holy fuck, did you actually design this?! this is fucking amazing.

 

[Homie]

@Lyrics Yeah dude, this is the original picture I worked off.

 

[Jaii]

@Lyrics Yeah dude, this is the original picture I worked off.

dduuudde this is fucking sick, nice job!

 

[Moon Knight]

That's epic man! Really good job with this.
Perhaps the thing you think is missing are the shoulders?

 

[Jaii]

i see a future within you with cred

smart lad keep it up

 

[Homie]

@"Moon Knight" You wouldn't be able to see the shoulder because I'm adding a 3D frame around which is montaged. Thanks for the advice and stuff!

@Lyrics let me know if there is anything specific you want me to design.

 

[Chase]

really sick imo, but i dont know too much on this stuff lmao

 

[Heroic]

it looks a bit unnatural around the chin and neck, can't tell if that's what your going for. hair looks great, overall a very creative and well executed piece!

 

[Space Time]

Straighten up the Neck. It looks weird without the shoulder, it just looks like its alienated or something idk...
But other than that everything else is perfection.

 

[αяυη]

That's quite clever and it looks really neat man, good job.

 

[Homie]

Thanks guys, will continue working on it.