First thing I've ever made :)

[Pepsi Man]

This is my first attempt at CS4 as it's been on my computer for a long time.
CnC pl0x

 

[Xypher]

so small :/ u cant even see details on it tbh :/

 

[Pepsi Man]

It's a userbar?

 

[Xypher]

i understand.. k i will change what i say, i dont like the diagonal bars either, u cant see whats going on in the background :/ idk im not a fan of user bars maybe i shouldnt have rated?

 

[indy]

not bad for your first one but as AustinB did say you might wanna change the diagonal lines to something else so you can see whats going on in background other than that its good

 

[Pepsi Man]

It's cool, I just was stating out it was a userbar, that is the size of them I did sorta mess up on the background was going to just add it to the main background but added it to the render

 

[Xypher]

ooooo yeah uhm, are u pentooling for render or wut? lol

 

[fuse]

All you have to do is lower the opacity of the scan lines. Also, for userbars you use the font called Visitor off of dafont. Set the size of that to 10pt with the Anti Alias set to None and a 1px black stroke set to Outside.

Might be complicated since you're starting out, but just giving you some tips.

 

[Pepsi Man]

Thank you, I'll get the font tonight.

 

[Salmonella]

6/10 nice try, a bit blurry + the text doesn't fit the background nor render.

 

[Guest]

so small :/ u cant even see details on it tbh :/

Make it a little bit bigger, not alot bigger just a couple of pixels

 

[rydenhigh]

I really don't consider this a piece of work. It's just so simple.
Anyways, you should try and look for some tutorials and follow them to the best of your ability's.
Before you know it, you'll be making GFX like the pro's.

 

[Vertigo]

its a userbar you idiots -.-... It's SUPPOSED to be that size. soften the reflection by blurring or something, then lower the opacity. Also lower the opacity of the scan lines a tad. The text, set the anti-alias to none then stroke it with a 1px black color. Then it should look fine. It doesn't have to be visitor.