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[Zelyix]

12th thing I have made in Photoshop

This is my newest signature! Please let me get some feedback and let me know what you think!

Original Render​

 

[Childish]

You are heading in the right direction.
It looks really good but work on the font and the render, sharpen it a little bit.
Hope my CnC helps.

 

[Zelyix]

You are heading in the right direction.
It looks really good but work on the font and the render, sharpen it a little bit.
Hope my CnC helps.

Derp, whats wrong with the font? :S

Also the render is sharpen 18 times, if I had done it anymore then the colors would be screwed up... :/

Thanks for the feedback

 

[Childish]

Derp, whats wrong with the font? :S

Also the render is sharpen 18 times, if I had done it anymore then the colors would be screwed up... :/

Thanks for the feedback

Text is a little bit TOO dark.
Umm the top left corner could use some lighting maybe?

 

[Zelyix]

Text is a little bit TOO dark.
Umm the top left corner could use some lighting maybe?

Too dark? Its the lightest thing on the signature.... :S
Oh and about the lightning, I was aiming for a "Dark to light" effect, but I will see if I can't change anything with the lightning in my next work!

Thanks for the feedback!

 

[Childish]

Too dark? Its the lightest thing on the signature.... :S
Oh and about the lightning, I was aiming for a "Dark to light" effect, but I will see if I can't change anything with the lightning in my next work!

Thanks for the feedback!

Ahh well if that's what you were aiming for, then I must say you achieved it.
I would love to CnC your next piece and see it too.
No problem!
Anyways, gotta go to a Christmas party now. :/