correct grammar?

[Loyal]

This firefighter just saved this pregnant
dog and her babies' lives from a fire in
her house. She is giving him kisses in
return





is that correct grammar?

 

[Yuuki]

It's not "is that correct grammar?" it's "was that proper grammar?" Also, your thread should start with "Is this proper grammar?" not "correct grammar?"

 

[NULLNULLNULL]

Yes it is correct. But that's a long sentence.

 

[Color]

No, it's not. There's no period to end the second sentence.

#Winning