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A Poem I wrote, for my Professor.

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Of many faces.

Watching, Planning, looking for his next reap​
she doesn't see him, as she is asleep.​

Careful and quiet, he climbs in the window​
to keep assured, that she doesn't know​

no-one would guess, here of all places​
climbs through the window, the man of many faces​

the news would report, many days later​
where they found the poor girl, below the dark freighter​

his evil deeds, many they are​
he could recount, as he drives in his car.​

but oh he was smart, on that happen day​
he had decided, to change his way​

now as his goal, he sells the taco​
and the new face he's chosen, is a poor man named Paco​

he's cheery and light, this taco salesman,​
unaware of his target, he's making a plan.​

please know, dear reader, this story is fiction,​
so please dont find, any fear in my diction​

but next time you lay, waiting for sleep​
Just keep in your mind, the man plans his next reap.​






Do you think she will find it spooky?​
 

Jupi

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Random said:
Of many faces.
Watching, Planning, looking for his next reap​
she doesn't see him, as she is asleep.​
Careful and quiet, he climbs in the window​
to keep assured, that she doesn't know​
no-one would guess, here of all places​
climbs through the window, the man of many faces​
the news would report, many days later​
where they found the poor girl, below the dark freighter​
his evil deeds, many they are​
he could recount, as he drives in his car.​
but oh, on that happen day,​
he decided to change his way​
now as his goal, he sells the taco​
and the new face he's chosen, is the poor man Paco​
he's cheery and light, this taco salesman,​
unaware completely, he's got a new fan.​
please know, this story is fiction,​
so dont find fear in my diction​
but next time you lay, waiting for sleep​
Just keep in your mind, the man plans his next reap.​




Do you think she will find it spooky?​


Tbh I love it man or.. gal

She might be a bit spooked :p

On another note, we should have a poem section (=
 

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Hansel said:
Tbh I love it man or.. gal

She might be a bit spooked :p

On another note, we should have a poem section (=
I was actually looking for one, haha ^~^

but thanks for the words.
 

Amp

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This is a beautiful piece of art.
 

Astro

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You just had to turn the killer into a taco salesman.
 

Random

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Hey, it was art. okay? all good art has taco salesman. no-one would suspect @astro

@radical it was the only thing that rhymes and it had to be 20 lines long couplet so I was like hmm...
 

Sharon

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Which class is this for? Is your professor strict about format? I think this is definitely dark but it flows nice for the most part.
 

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Sharon said:
Which class is this for? Is your professor strict about format?  I think this is definitely dark but it flows nice for the most part.
Oh no, I just wanted to spook mi professora, so I wrote a couplet (I'm sure I've already misused that word, ten times in the past week), so I wrote a poem.

I'm a disturbed gentleman, in case you haven't seen.
 

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Aw fuck man, I was thinking about going to Mexico....
 
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