2 of Nofear's Poems

[nofear1999]

Hunger - Freestyle
Growling,Grumbling, smell in the air....
Grumbling, Growling, sweet sweet aroma....
My mouth is like a black hole as I inhale the food....
There is no more growling or grumbling, only pain of being overstuffed... with Macaroni...

Bickering - Haiku
please PLEASE stop talking
please stop bickering because
you are annoying

 

[Flow'n]

Nice poems but kinda short.

 

[Legend_mybb_import1694]

They would probably be better if they actually rhymed, because right now they sound like short conversations.

 

[Flow'n]

LOl Legend that is pretty good.. Dude Haiku are longer than that so its not a valid one.. It's a miniature poem. But not a poem. So Legend is right it's likea conservation.