12/16/12 FK News: #1

[Jimmy]

RE: 16/12/12 FK News: #1

This is a weekly newsletter. Thanks for the Feedback.

 

[S‍inister]

RE: 16/12/12 FK News: #1

I personally did not like the song, because in my opinion I feel that the song could have had a better meaning and tone and that it literally bored me.

I think you should take this out. We do not know who "I" even is. Also, the sentence does not make sense.

I'm guessing CRATE wrote that. If you want to do an opinion you should do something like: "I personally do not like the song, the meaning and tone bore me." CRATE said during an interview with The News Crew. I don't know, just seems more professional.

My next suggestion is to change the font, although that could get annoying, maybe. But I have no idea if there any fonts that look "newspaperish."

Overall, this was really good. 9/10 in my opinion. Nice job, Jimmy and others.

EDIT: Now that I read the whole 'Media' section, there are many grammar errors, and sentences that do not "flow." Other than that, very nice job with this.

 

[Philly]

RE: 16/12/12 FK News: #1

Very nice job, This was a great read, and pretty damn on point.

 

[Jimmy]

RE: 16/12/12 FK News: #1

Very nice job, This was a great read, and pretty damn on point.

Shall try my best to make it better next time.

 

[Superior]

RE: 16/12/12 FK News: #1

Very HQ news letter keep up the good work!

 

[Kasteen]

RE: 16/12/12 FK News: #1

Everyone in the crew did a great job!
Very organized, and clean. Thanks Jimmy.

 

[Den]

RE: 16/12/12 FK News: #1

Looks so clean, and really informs people on what they missed..

 

[Justice]

RE: 16/12/12 FK News: #1

Very nice job, This was a great read, and pretty damn on point.

I agree with you
But wish you would of sent me the interview answers

 

[Nite]

RE: 16/12/12 FK News: #1

Good job on the news, this has been long awaited.