Poetry
Wrote a poem to try and win someone's heart back. It's my first one I've ever completed. Let me know you like?
I know what I'm doing is right
Me fight for you…show more
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I went ahead a tweaked some things I believe help it flow much better. Take my suggestions or not, either way I thought this was very cute and written pretty well.
I know what I'm doing is right
To fight for you
With all my might.
Even if you go far astray
I won't give up,
I won't turn away.
I will fight for you, every hour, of every day.
I've been trying to find the words
To prove my love is true,
No matter what happens
I will always fight for you.
Always love and care for you,
And never again break your heart.
I promise you this,
I'll always play my part.
I know what I'm doing is right,
Me fighting for you,
We've been through everything together
So I know we'll pull through.
For you I'll do it all
I will hold you tight
Even be there when you call,
In the middle of the night.
I'll be there when the bad dreams won't end,
When they keep you up at night.
I'll wipe away those tears, my love
Don't worry, I will make it right.
And I don't care if the buildings five stories tall
No matter what happens,
I'll always be there, I'll always catch you when you fall.
I will fight for you, my dear
Until at last you know.
That my love for you
Can only grow.
I know these are but words to you
But trust I mean them to the core.
They are everything I promise to do.
And much, much more.