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Tempts

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Been moving away from using stock images. No stocks in either of these.

As always, feedback is appreciated. If you don't like something tell me why/what I could do to improve upon it, rather than just leaving "I don't like this" or something along those lines.

 
The second one looks great to me! The first one though imo has to much going on, as in the background draws my attention away from the text apart from that they are both good
 
I think these are pretty cool, I think you should try using more colors instead of stacking the same color, that's just my preference.
 
I like them both, but on the first one the background transition with the two maps is weird.
 
got said:
I like them both, but on the first one the background transition with the two maps is weird.
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what maps .-. I dont get what you mean
 
I'm digging them homie!
Like some of the subtle features I noticed.
 
Tempts said:
what maps .-. I dont get what you mean
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The background of the 1st graphic looks like a map from CoGhosts, and on the other side it looks like Quarry from Mw2.
 
Tempts said:
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This is all it is just with lens distortion
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Well shit distortion got me fucked up, that's exactly what it looks like though, and considering you were making these for Jade it seemed to add up.
 
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