if I may make a recommendation, from one noob to another, I would make the text transparent, like set the opacity a little lower (55%-75%) so that the background picture can show more.
Just my recommendation, but still pretty good man, good job
Well, just to make your mind at ease, I did message you on HF asking you to skype / aim me broseph... I can do this on AF as well if need be to verify my identity
You should try and work on making it more legible as far as the color, overlapping, and picture placement. My first impression was that it was hard to read and i didn't know where to look first. You should try and make the text proportionate enough to where it all fits smoothly and maybe work on making a color scheme. I would recommend looking into some beginner tutorials maybe. Keep on practicing for sure though.