Respawn Stresser Thread Design

I would appreciate feedback on the following design:

Version 1:


Version 2:


Thread can be found here: http://www.hackforums.net/showthread.php?tid=3126261

I also created the Respawn Stresser signature, which took a couple of minutes. Nothing special.

Please keep the following in mind:

• I've been doing graphic designing for three years, but haven't once followed a tutorial for anything, other than Cinema 4D (which I rarely use)
• I never re-edit PSD files and claim them as my own. My work is mine, from scratch.
• This is my second ever thread design. The first one sucked, and that design was over a year old.
• This is the first piece of artwork I've created in well over three-four months.

Thanks.

v1 is way better, That is some good web design type GFX.

Megadeth said:

v1 is way better, That is some good web design type GFX.

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Thanks a lot. I appreciate the compliments.

This took roughly around an hour or two to design, then an additional hour to make the second version.

I think it looks very good, although I think the splatter in between the modules could be replaced/removed. Also the title is very plain and could use some more modifications or something. Other then those two things it's amazing and I think you did a lovely job!

Slyestcat said:

I think it looks very good, although I think the splatter in between the modules could be replaced/removed. Also the title is very plain and could use some more modifications or something. Other then those two things it's amazing and I think you did a lovely job!

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Thanks for the constructive criticism, Slyestcat. Me and Astonish were actually discussing suitable resplacements for the splats, but we couldn't seem to find anything else which seemed suitable. The logo was just a quick replacement for the previous 3-dimensional design.

Once again, I appreciate the response.