rating for my review please!

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I like it, a fair rating, good vocabulary and grammar (spelling too) and you describe quite a bit.

What you should improve is perhaps describe some of the other vikings, basically more infomation.
 
I like it, a fair rating, good vocabulary and grammar (spelling too) and you describe quite a bit.

What you should improve is perhaps describe some of the other vikings, basically more infomation.

Ahhh, ok, I will do so! It will add more "oomph" to it while being very descriptive and educational!
 
looks good also..just improve it a bit and it will be perfect.
 
Wow your review is good... kip it up bro..

Thanks! i try my best!

Good one, I like it. You're pretty talented.

Thanks! ^^ I have been interested in writing since i was a wee lass. I have always wanted to make money by writing, and lo and behold, i can!
 
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