I'd say a lot personally.
As far as ratings go I would give it a 3/10.
The text is bit blurry, which means you could have blurred the crown a little, to at least make it blend in.
Then as the others said, the yellow text is un-readable, which you never want in a signature.
I would also guess you are just starting out, try looking at some tutorials and videos around the web to help get better.
Its okay okay ... but it dont seem that apealing and like other said some text is unreadable
but i knw u will come up somthing far much better then this
The second one is definitely better than the first one. Just like someone else said, the first one's crown is focused the most, making it seem like the main point.
The sharpness of the second one gives it a "bang". I also like the positioning of the crown.
I'm no GFX expert, I'll rate it a 8/10 for something that I would want to put into my sig box.