Qinghai Tibet Railway - The story

Hello everyone,

I tend to enjoy myself in creative writing.
I've started a fictional story about a man called: Lian Tsui.
The man is a farmer, but get's in a Chinese prison.
It was my first try at creative writing.
People tend to tell me that I'm good with writing, where I don't agree.
Could you rate my stories from 1 to 10?

Thank you.

The full story could be found at:
http://liantsui.blogspot.nl/

Sincerely.

I would probably go on and write part 4.