Provenance's Poetry

Buddy_mybb_import10515

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Read about 3, it's late so I'll finish tomorrow if I remember, lol. You've got writing potential, that's for sure. here's one that I wrote a few years ago, some parts wont make sense but it's because I was like 15 and didn't know what everything meant. I think at least, lemme dig it up;

 

It's like your talking in a circle, slowly building up to the idea.
I like it. :happy2:
 
I honestly don't even remember what it's about. I ought to write more, it's a healthy exercise. You should too.
 
Just that you have a small collection of pieces shows enough if you ask me. Build your confidence, you certainly have the capability. I mean look, you've got like 6 poems write there. You obviously don't have to limit yourself.
 
Thank you for the encouragement.
I'll try to crank more out.

I get told that too many of my poems are hopeless though.
I'll try to go for something happier.
 
That last one had me mind fucked so bad
 
Pink Floyd said:
Any time . Hopeless meaning sad? That's fine, art is art dude.

Yep, hopeless as in sad.
If you notice, only two are about good times, and only one is silly/fun.

Things are getting better all the time, though. :nice:
 
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