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dont judge to harshly this time, I've improved since that last one.

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 [verse 1]
From another galexy I came from outer space
I arrived on this earth 
just so yall could get a taste
Of what I got to fuckin say
Gillymane in this place
You can talk reckless
I'm leavin this earth anywayz

Hop up in my spaceship
my U.F.O
I could hover forever
its where ever you wanna go
I got that UF Kush
That UF blow
Take a hit of my Uf and I'll have you forever gone

listen son, I dont know if you can hear
I'm the one thats on this track I could blow up fuckin gears
plug me in and I'm feelin charged I just need a socket
give me any beat vanessa flow and Ill rock it

thats right I hop up in my UFO and leave
aint nobody showin it, but when I'm gone they gonna grieve
im like worldwide across the fuckin sea, better yet, I'm known across the galexy

[chorus]
heh, I'm like an alien son, matter fact I take it back
because I am one
when I leave this earth yall bitches gunna see
that I'm one of the realest here,
and your gunna miss me
[repeat]

[verse 2]
I swear that soon I'm going to grow some alien wings
and fly up really fuckin high, and destroy everything

I'm tired of all the racism, I'm tired of all the hatin
I'm tired of black and black white and white discrimination

I'm tellin you dawg this world is fuckin crazy
thats why I gotta keep rappin and keep it on the daily
I'm thanking all the people who helped make me
but I gotta hop up in my spaceship and leave
everything I say respect it cuz I tell it real
aint nobody in my state of mind or know how i feel
to be an alien since birth
I came out of my alien mom, and said lets destroy earth
sometimes I really wish I had a UFO
so I could leave this shitty planet that we call earth but I don't
So I'm stuck, in this fucked up place, now that you've heard my thought
tell me how does it taste?
[chorus]
[repeat chorus]
[let beat ride out]
 
Nice, How long did it take to make this one?
 
If you can't just make it flow, and not take 2-3 hours to write it, it probably wont be good. This is really bad imo, sorry.
 
Yea , it doesn't flow :\
 
To revolved around drugs. Grasp your mind around some of tupacs better songsa. Not all rap is about sex and drugs.
 
Just a question, how old are you? Your raps are... weird?
 
I am going to post my rap and get some feedback haha.
 
You guys are lame, if you listen to the beat, you will here the flow, I'll record it in a bit
 
Pink Floyd said:
To revolved around drugs. Grasp your mind around some of tupacs better songsa. Not all rap is about sex and drugs.
Lil Wayne and the rest of these mediocre artists are corrupting the mind of individuals that are new to the game. It really is sad. When you listen to a rap song you don't want to get tired of it after five minutes. For example Soulja boy is cool for about 2 weeks and then its repetitive garbage.

@OP
Its once again, alright. But I sort of agree with Pink.
 
Close this thread, obviously people with no-lifes, don't know good music.
 
Thread will be closed upon request. But don't expect to post something you made and only get positive feedback. I gave you my honest feedback. If you can't handle that you probably should not be posting these types of things.
 
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