Honestly if I am going to change the logo it is going to have to be completely a resign, and nothing close the the current one, which you obviously where basing yours off of. The only thing I would add is if the logo itself is the entire header area, meaning the entire blue part. It also must be extremely HQ, which takes alot of time, patience, and technique. It isn't a job for anyone, but I am willing to even pay when the time is right, which isn't now, as I don't know of anyone that can complete the job to my standards unfortunately.