Need help please!

Loyal

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so i have an exam tomorrow for college, its an essay! my worst fears lol.

anyways the story is about how women loved her husband so much that she can't forget him, so I'm guessing its about love and memory.

i need a good thesis statement, please anyone? i beg you haha
 
Poison said:
That is not hard at all?
How can you not think of a thesis statement about love? love is the most cliche thing in the universe. Google it or something.
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Because idk how to write a thesis statement, instead of telling me to use google, you can actually help because i did use google and i found nothing interesting. Im not that lazy.
 
Let's start by asking ourselves, what is a thesis statement?
- A thesis statement is one sentence that is a prequel to what your entire essay is going to be about.

Now that you know what a thesis statement is, ask yourself this:
- What is my paper going to be on?

Since you finally found out what you are going to write about, I suggest trying to sum up your entire paper into one sentence. After you have come up with that sentence, you finally have come up with your solution: a thesis statement.
 

hmm-

What is love? love is something we all feel, love is affectionate, and undeniable. True love can last forever and ever. True love is putting your interests and affections above your own. YOUR willing to sacrifice everything to make them happy. Love is in your heart, even if its gone, it will be always felt and tattooed in your heart. When memory and love mixes it greats a long lasting love story.

is this a good start?
 

Very good, Loyal! now you're thinking outside the box.
 
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