My very first poem

_vili

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All will end to the lost. And what do you got? A worthless life, waiting to be lost in the dust. Now you know what to do. There's a treasure waiting for you. You just need it to find, the peace of your mind. And then will your life, have the price of a dime.​
 
Oh, it's that place i have used it for finding brushes.
 
seems like you put a lot of thought into it, well done
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I just made it in 10 mins or less, but it has good message.
 
Some peepz are just talented with words.

When I try and do this I usually end up rhyming cat with my hat...
 
Some peepz are just talented with words.

When I try and do this I usually end up rhyming cat with my hat...
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usually when I make poems it's a failed Haiku, heres one I had to make for English class at school, it was Christmas related --

Very snowy days,
Indeed they are ice chilling
but are meaningful... <<(reference to Jesus's birthday)

I suck at poetry...
 
I like it too. Nice rhyme scheme you got going. Short, sweet, meaningful poem
 
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