My First Beat (Link)

[Night]

https://soundcloud.com/shitislit/miller-time

Took like an hour to make, I just fucked around until something sounded half-decent. I know I need to turn the bass up a little bit more, make a much more solid ending, and add some variation to the bass, but what else should I do to make it better?
Thanks. Let me know what you think.

Also, I recently sold my other Soundcloud, so RIP URL.

Edit: Added new and improved version, thanks for all of the input so far guys. It's fun to make this stuff.

 

[Toxic]

It aint half bad i like the beat

 

[Ømega]

it's seriously not that bad but like you said, crank the bass up

 

[Nominies]

All producers started somewhere and this isnt a bad start. Keep it up.

 

[Night]

I uploaded the new version of the song if anyone wants to see it. Thanks for all of the input guys, I do really like how it's turning out.