Making a Mixtape (opinions on a song I'm writing)

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Hella goofy. Stick with something you know. Also, lowkey, keys, and keys, do not rhyme.
 
Color said:
Hella goofy.  Stick with something you know.   Also, lowkey, keys, and keys, do not rhyme.  
Not offended that it was a negative comment, but I wish you would understand why I did that. Just because it is a rap song doesn't necessarily mean that it consistently has to rhyme. Thanks for the feedback; stick to commenting on something you know.
 
ayyyyyyyye fam ill be sure to cop ur tape
 
The best kind of rap is personal rap. Write under a different 'persona' or whatever but write about your personal experiences or struggles. Too many people in the rap game already sing about shit they're not and the genre itself has seen better times.
 
Totally understand what you're saying! I'll be rapping about what I actually do and enjoy, etc. on the mixtape as well. It's just a little fun thing I'm doing: writing stories, basically.
 
gym said:
I fux with it fam, I would cop it as well.

I'LL POST IT HERE FOR THE FORUM KORNER FAMILY WHEN I DROP IT. I just now decided to get serious, but hopefully I can perfect a few songs within the next few weeks; sucks being busy.
 
Bump; more opinions pls. Just wondering if this persona is entertaining to people.
 
Daquan said he's about to drop the next mixtape

Said it's gonna be fire!
 
Dis tape gon be fire thooo let anigga cop it free we need money for baby mamma.

JK. You write dope lines man. As long as you can make it sound great on a track then you're good. Good shit fam good luck.
 
Bump; let me know how you feel. In addition to this song, this persona will partake in a couple others.
 
Beats said:
Dis tape gon be fire thooo let anigga cop it free we need money for baby mamma.

JK. You write dope lines man. As long as you can make it sound great on a track then you're good. Good shit fam good luck.
Very appreciated! I'm super stoked to release something.
 
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