the part where you end the cinematic then transition to gameplay the cc goes away.. that threw me off. its a nice cc but should of kept it at beginning of gameplay.. like the little flashes! throw in some screen pump!
When it went from the cinematics to the actual clip it looked kinda weird, not sure how to explain it haha. You should of kept the CC the whole way through too.
Not a bad edit, Although you could have used a more appealing text for the "I Can't motion track" in the beginning. Although, that's nothing major. Good job!
I thought it was alright. I like edits that are clear enough that I can actually see the clip but flashy or unique so that it stands out and is memorable. This was pretty basic man, keep working on it!