Just uploaded my first gameplay/commentary!

[Plasma]

Just uploaded my first commentary please go watch it and if its not too much trouble could I have a shoutout .

http://www.youtube.com/Mohsquito

Give me constructive criticism!

 

[Lost]

Nice commentary but they get bored quick..

alot of people do commentary's for 10 min etc.. get boring to me..

Overall a nice commentary