I don't know.. In my opinion these tees are too loud. They'd be hard af to incorporate into a fit.
Also, for the second one, I'd remove the brand name on the shirt. People don't want to become a walking billboard. These are all my opinions.. Don't take em personally brah.
For reference, I'd take a look at blvck scale, supreme and alife etc. also, if anything brows karmaloop.com
If you're going for the high fashion route in the future, look at sites like mrporter, ssence, CDG, rick owens websiteand grailed. These sites are very noteworthy.
Good luck bro!