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Skriptic

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Well, I'm making some stuff for my design/other stuff brand that I might make soon. I made a signature for the design part. I was going for an "Old funk" (Get the name?) and Retro feel with some minimalism to go with it.



PS it looks better on a lighter gray BG

Tell me what you think. Rate/Hate below.
 
Serene said:
Not bad bro, good luck with your brand.
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Thanks, it's mostly going to be like Design/Music/Technology. Kind of like google except on a more concentrated scale.
 
Since i am an enabler

its alright can it be better yes but it isn't really bad

you can only get better and better with practice and time
 
ZFX said:
Since i am an enabler

its alright can it be better yes but it isn't really bad

you can only get better and better with practice and time
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Been designing for 2 years.

I really hate when people say that when they don't say how to make it better. It really helps a lot /sarcasm.
 
*Criticism alert* Lobster is an overused font. Remove the pointless brush marks on the background and it should look less busy. Simplicity is key in design. Sorry if I sound like a dick, I would say what I just said to anyone.
 
I like it, but there are some things I would have changed.

I would have changed the font to a bit more classic 50's fonts, I would also have changed the colors a bit to blend more with each other.
 
Zelyix said:
I like it, but there are some things I would have changed.

I would have changed the font to a bit more classic 50's fonts, I would also have changed the colors a bit to blend more with each other.
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I was looking for a 60's-80's font that would look good, but I couldn't find one that suited the theme, mind linking me one?

Also, to the post above the "Pointless brush marks" are the retro patterns that me and a friend designed for our design class earlier this year. (We copied some, lol) And they are what give it color, Ill post one later without them and you can see how dull it looks.
 

http://www.dafont.com/channel.font
http://www.dafont.com/brannboll.font
http://www.dafont.com/eight-track.font
http://www.dafont.com/loki-cola.font

Those are just some I found on the fly...
 
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