First Vertical Tag

[Jorim™]

So...never done a vertical tag before, so decided to give it a whirl...
Here's My Outcome...CnC Please:blackhat:

 

[Vanquish]

I like it man.
I feel the energy coming from it.
The white lines distract me though, but it's nothing big.
The C4d in the back could use some work on it, looks like you just stuck it there.
But i'll give it a 7/10!