The pumps were a tiny bit overused, The starter face of where the screen was zoomed in was a little bit too much as well, I'm not an editor but I could try get you some good tips.
Use some better pumps and some color corrections to make the screen look a tiny bit used.
The pumps were a tiny bit overused, The starter face of where the screen was zoomed in was a little bit too much as well, I'm not an editor but I could try get you some good tips.
Use some better pumps and some color corrections to make the screen look a tiny bit used.
For your first edit, Id say it wasn't bad. Like they're saying, the zoom was a bit overused but overall id say it was good and you have mad potential man! Good luck!
Could make the screen pumps a little less and sadly now a days people are used to crazy strong CC. For me the CC was okay but people are just used to stronger stuff so might want to add a bit more to it other than that it was good keep at it. I want to start editing again but meh :/