First Commentary, Tips are Welcome!

hey guys!

i have made my first commentary on mw2. You can view it here

[video=youtube]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ikvIzxKEL_0[/video]

This is my first commentary, so please give me some tips on what i can improve. Also, if you like it, please comment, and rate.

thanks guys!

Blow your nose, ffs...

Pretty good for a first commentary. When i made mine, it was really bad and i mean, REALLY bad.

I might do some on PC gameplay now that i have a good pc for recording.

All in all, good job.