eRa Displays Intro - By Tempts

[Tempts]

[video=youtube]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pjv-QdveEGc[/video]

Constructive critique and feedback is always appreciated.

 

[Tempts]

bumping this because no one gave me any feedback lmao

 

[Jupi]

because it is really good my friend, I really like it

 

[Fade]

It's really clean man. To improve you could possibly make the start a lot more interesting? Maybe a different transition rather than it just turning around..

Going bed, night lel.

 

[O F]

ARE YOU JADE TEMPTS!!!!!!! 3333333

 

[Tempts]

ARE YOU JADE TEMPTS!!!!!!! 3333333

I was lmao, left a few days ago.

 

[O F]

followed you on twitter for a long ass time. I was in the chat when the first started and like a month ago you might know me 'Wuqz'

 

[Senpai]

Pretty clean and simple, like the idea. Good job man. 10/10

 

[Cred]

nice job tempts, but the blast sound effect at the end sounds a bit off

 

[Twinzys]

I like the render and the effects but the sound doesn't match with the video, its a slam sound fx and a popping up text. Other than that 8/10

 

[Hurt]

This is sick man, did you model everything yourself? Aside from the eRa logo of course. Anyway, keep it up man I saw your other intro and that was dope. Love your work

 

[Tempts]

This is sick man, did you model everything yourself? Aside from the eRa logo of course. Anyway, keep it up man I saw your other intro and that was dope. Love your work

Yeah, all models are my own. Glad you like it