Ecstasy's Signature.

[Bradley]

I made this today, i know the sizing is bad again but it looks better sized than the last one i did.

@Ecstasy Won't use this but i thought i would make it anyway.

 

[Poison]

I think it looks good! I like the font and the color. The background is a little big, but otherwise it is good work. I will use it for something.

 

[Matigo]

Not one of your bests, but still good. I think you need to clear it up a bit, too many things are happening at once. I can barely read Ecstasy, but its a good start.

Kudos to you.

 

[Bradley]

@Ecstasy I sized this down

It still looks a little weird but its better.

 

[Poison]

@Bradley What if you took out the black background and just had the bars, font, and the flares? no background? I think it would look good with the dark theme, which is what I use.

 

[Bradley]

@Ecstasy I don't think i can do you because i have done the whole thing on the black and it took me 1 Hour to do, i will try make you something else today or tomorrow.

 

[Poison]

@Bradley what if you just took what you did on a clean slate, no background. Do you know how to do that?

If you have any questions, @Yeti is pretty good with GFX and I know he will be more than happy to help you out with anything man.

 

[Bradley]

@Ecstasy I did this i didn't know it would be that easy,

Should i remove anything else?

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That is it with a transparent background.

 

[Poison]

@Bradley Ok, I reallly do like the style. But the black background and that green I think could go. The Green bars, the font, and the flares are what I am really digging. So like if you could just get the flares, the background green slant bars, and the font, I think you got yourself a signature here.

Sorry if I seem demanding and a pain in the ass, I really don't mean to be. But since I am not speaking directly to you I know it seems hard to figure out what I am saying. I really do appreciate the work you are putting effort into it though. If it works out, I definitely will use it. I dig the color, font, and flares.

 

[Bradley]

Give me half an hour and i'll just remake this all, is the colors okay? So slant bars, flares and font. Do you want the debry removed aswell?

 

[Poison]

No, I think the dabry is a nice touch, honestly. I like it. It is different than a lot of the others, which I am all about the exclusiveness.

 

[Bradley]

@Ecstasy Aim me B.RA.DL.EY I can talk there.

 

[Tempts]

Not sure how I feel about this, has a LOT going on in it, that doesn't really work together.

Constructive Stuff:

- Work on 3D Text, Better lighting, positioning, and materials will go a long way.

- Stocks/Blending; sparks/flares/splatter or whatever it is all over the signature don't really work with the sig IMO

 

[Pacino]

Suprising me more and more, day by day...

 

[Astro]

First off, it's a little too large in terms of height.

You're jumping the gun waaay too much.
Start a lot simpler, no flares, no particles.
You haven't grasped composition yet, so less is more.

Learn one program at a time.
Get your renders looking fresh before you even export them to photoshop.

You gotta learn to take advantage of lighting, it's really degrading your renders (from what I've seen).

Tldr, start simple, read up on composition, and sort out your renders.

 

[Bradley]

@Astro I was following what Ecstasy told me to do.

 

[Poison]

He was listening to what I had to say. If he wants to change it, he simply can.

 

[Astro]

You can do what you want, but if you want to learn, listen to me.

You're gonna suck for quite a while so don't get defensive.

 

[Bradley]

@Astro How was i getting 'Defensive'? May I ask? I was just saying I was listening to what Ecstasy told me to do?

 

[Astro]

Well, you were clearly defending your work when you put the blame (for lack of better word), on Ectasy's directions.

Well done for trying, but perhaps when somebody instructs you out of your league, just tell them you can't do it, rather than wasting the time of both parties.

But above all, read up on composition, and the things I mentioned previously.