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Sector

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Here's my first phone case for my store.

As much as I hate using oil-paint, it looked nice on this.

*NOTE: The watermark is NOT on the final design.*

 
F*cking is pretty hard to read. Your logo should be smaller. No one likes when the companies logo is half their case. Great design.

If you can make a sick illuminati iPhone 5c case, that would be awesome.
 
Fed said:
F*cking is pretty hard to read. Your logo should be smaller. No one likes when the companies logo is half their case. Great design.

If you can make a sick illuminati iPhone 5c case, that would be awesome.
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My logo is not on the final design. It's on there right now to prevent kids from stealing work.
 
I'm not quite a fan of everything below the word 'dreamer'.
Everything above that looks good enough.
 
Sector said:
My logo is not on the final design. It's on there right now to prevent kids from stealing work.
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Gotcha, I don't think the use of the word "you'd" is good for this case. Just my opinion.
 
Fed said:
Gotcha, I don't think the use of the word "you'd" is good for this case. Just my opinion.
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How so?

"You may say I'm a dreamer.." . . . who/what else would I be referring to when I say "you." Therefore, "you'd" would be a fitting word. And also, "you" is the word used in the song, therefore it won't/can't be changed.​
 
"But you'd be fucking wrong" I mean. Maybe "But you are fucking wrong"? I don't know, just doesn't sound right to me.
 
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