You have decent effects and lighting but there is a lot to work on. You need to define your focal more for one. Also, you have a little too much negative space in my opinion on the right, crop some off. Your text placement is good, and idea is decent, but you need to find a better font, and the line should be worked on. Try and get some more effects in there, maybe some effect c4d's or brushes.
You have decent effects and lighting but there is a lot to work on. You need to define your focal more for one. Also, you have a little too much negative space in my opinion on the right, crop some off. Your text placement is good, and idea is decent, but you need to find a better font, and the line should be worked on. Try and get some more effects in there, maybe some effect c4d's or brushes.