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Read the fucking title?

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Now do you like one up there ^ or in sig?
 
Micro360z said:
nice the border should be grey though
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No, it shouldn't.

You have decent effects and lighting but there is a lot to work on. You need to define your focal more for one. Also, you have a little too much negative space in my opinion on the right, crop some off. Your text placement is good, and idea is decent, but you need to find a better font, and the line should be worked on. Try and get some more effects in there, maybe some effect c4d's or brushes.
 
Vertigo said:
No, it shouldn't.

You have decent effects and lighting but there is a lot to work on. You need to define your focal more for one. Also, you have a little too much negative space in my opinion on the right, crop some off. Your text placement is good, and idea is decent, but you need to find a better font, and the line should be worked on. Try and get some more effects in there, maybe some effect c4d's or brushes.
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I don't use c4d's ever. Never will :p I am quite proud of this one :3 lol
 
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