Yeah so just trying to make something with a render, its ok I think wish I could think like.. the background is a bit empty but oh well its the first 1
Hmm, It's not too bad for the beginner scheme... I like the contrast, but it's a bit monotone. The text could be much more interesting, I suggest making it a solid white and arranging it into a few rows. Remove the black overlay or whatever you have there, and brighten them eyes up for a nicer effect.
Yeah like others said, not bad for first maybe add some more effects to the render by making the eyes glow or something. Just keep trying to use tuts and ull get the hang of it in no time