ASW Logo Concepts

@Sector
@Tempts
@cas
@cred
-All other, you guys are right, I am closing this thread so nothing can be spammed on, this logo was shit. I had a really aggravated day and took things out on everyone tonight. I apologize if I came off cocky or arrogant. I am really not. Most of you know me to know I am not. I am working on a few more logos tomorrow for customers and I am taking everything into consideration and I will post a new logos tomorrow evening for rating / to showcase. Sorry guys!

If you want an honest 100% opinion then here:

They're horrible, they're just fonts with colors. Try working on drawing a concept design first and then getting that in ai or what ever you use. Try making atleast 3 concept designs per logo you're doing for a better outcome.

Thats it. Sorry if i seemed rude.

Cred said:

If you want an honest 100% opinion then here:

They're horrible, they're just fonts with colors. Try working on drawing a concept design first and then getting that in ai or what ever you use. Try making atleast 3 concept designs per logo you're doing for a better outcome.

Thats it. Sorry if i seemed rude.

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ur a bulli Cred

bulli's don't get far in life.

Aimi said:

ur a bulli Cred

bulli's don't get far in life.

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Trust me. It'll help him in the future. I could have sugar coated it but then it wont make him look good when he shows that logo to who ever he made it for.

Cred said:

Trust me. It'll help him in the future. I could have sugar coated it but then it wont make him look good when he shows that logo to who ever he made it for.

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ur still a bulli ;-;

u bulli me daily.

Cred said:

If you want an honest 100% opinion then here:

They're horrible, they're just fonts with colors. Try working on drawing a concept design first and then getting that in ai or what ever you use. Try making atleast 3 concept designs per logo you're doing for a better outcome.

Thats it. Sorry if i seemed rude.

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Lol, like your avatar? A font with a large C and "red" crammed in it? Honestly, I can do much much better. I design for a living. This is what customer wanted, this is what customer got.

How about:
http://imgur.com/GYNdrB8
http://imgur.com/2rVMkMt

How about those "fonts" with an outline. 

Everyone is entitled to an opinion. I am sorry I design professionally looking designs while you have plastered crayola shit.

I can agree, the logo is basic, not the best and does look plain. But it's what the customer wanted, that's what they get.

I use Illustrator for all of my work, everything I do is in AI.

Skosh said:

Lol, like your avatar? A font with a large C and "red" crammed in it? Honestly, I can do much much better. I design for a living. This is what customer wanted, this is what customer got.

How about:
http://imgur.com/GYNdrB8
http://imgur.com/2rVMkMt

How about those "fonts" with an outline. 

Everyone is entitled to an opinion. I am sorry I design professionally looking designs while you have plastered crayola shit.

I can agree, the logo is basic, not the best and does look plain. But it's what the customer wanted, that's what they get.

I use Illustrator for all of my work, everything I do is in AI.

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1. I didnt design my avatar.
2. Dont make a feedback thread if youre going to get pissed.
3. I don't design for a living but i have been doing graphics for 4 years now, and i guarantee you're not better than me. As you said everyone is entitled to their opinion.

Skosh said:

What do you guys think?

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Skosh said:

 
Everyone is entitled to an opinion. I am sorry I design professionally looking designs while you have plastered crayola shit.

I can agree, the logo is basic, not the best and does look plain. But it's what the customer wanted, that's what they get.

I use Illustrator for all of my work, everything I do is in AI.

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Did you just ask for feedback on a thread and then cry when you got feedback you didn't like?

Slay said:

Did you just ask for feedback on a thread and then cry when you got feedback you didn't like?

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By far from crying lol, everyone has an opinion. @Cred had an opinion. I respect it. Lol, this logo does suck, I can do much much much better. It's just what the customer wante..

@Cred, im 16 make $300-500 a week designing (part time) and going on my 4th year of designing. Though you may be better than me but none of my work is trash like you proclaimed or I wouldn't sell or stay as busy as I do. Right?

They are quite shitty tbh. I agree with @Cred tbh. If this is your 4th year and work like that is being produced then damn...

Nostalgic said:

They are quite shitty tbh. I agree with @Cred tbh. If this is your 4th year and work like that is being produced then damn...

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You guys are looking at this logo from today's point of view. The owners of this company are around 45 years old. They dont want something like what we want. I design what people want. Even though it may be shitty, I give them what THEY want. Tat's how I stay busy and produce how I do.

Skosh said:

You guys are looking at this logo from today's point of view. The owners of this company are around 45 years old. They dont want something like what we want. I design what people want. Even though it may be shitty, I give them what THEY want. Tat's how I stay busy and produce how I do.

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OH! Well if they are e.g. 45+ then I am sure they do not want something overboard. I would use a more professional font tho...Maybe a simple yet clean one?

Vouch, cred just ran through you, you suck. Throw your computer away, you'll never make it, more trash talk.

cas said:

Vouch, cred just ran through you, you suck. Throw your computer away, you'll never make it, more trash talk.

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Cred didnt run through me lol. I quite honestly dont care lol. My bank, my customers nor my lifestyle has never had a problem with how I design. I do my job, my job pays, I live a swell life.. Opinions are like assholes. Everyone has one.

Skosh said:

You guys are looking at this logo from today's point of view. The owners of this company are around 45 years old. They dont want something like what we want. I design what people want. Even though it may be shitty, I give them what THEY want. Tat's how I stay busy and produce how I do.

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This is the worst excuse I've seen. Regardelss of age, you want to make a timeless logo almost 100% of the time 

if you knew it wasn't going to look good, tell them. You're the designer, you should know what will look good. 

My feedback on these:

While a type based logo would work for a company like this, the execution isn't there.

The font choice is decent, but the kerning, color scheme, and overall look of the logo isn't good.

If I were to change these I'd eliminate the outer strokes, and instead just make one large outline for the whole logo.

Font choice would be different, but similar style (Sharp angles, showing movement)

Colors aren't awful, but I would go with some nice, bold colors that don't look like default PS/AI swatches.

Here's a few that I think could work in combination with eachother (one fill, one outline.)
https://gyazo.com/68616df67986e1d473049a8e6f5b1257

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https://gyazo.com/fa7ed860f94f6ff726a3e9dd1c54b929

Fills w/ outline examples (what I feel works)

Don't ask for critique if you're going to plop your ass onto a fat dick when you receive what needs to be said.

You're a designer. You need to listen to ALL opinions to improve. Being an arrogant cock and tossing around your oh-so astonishing design tenure and whopping sales gets you NOWHERE.

Get over yourself.

With that out of the way, let's talk about the design.

Regardless of "what the customer wants," your style of design should not be affected. You went from a decent MXBikes logo to a beginner-quality logotype that looks as if it were made in 10 minutes. Considering your quality of work has decreased overtime, I'm more than positive that your MXBikes logo are stock images tossed together with a few modifications. Feel free to say "no it's not" and I'll be more than happy to reverse image search it all for you. You didn't create the font, so I don't know why you stated that you AI'd everything. It's just a tacky font with a tacky stroke with a tacky and plain color scheme.

I hate designers that walk around acting like King Shit.

It's sad that I used to see you as an alright designer that had potential.