Where the light hits his shoulder, I don't think it was the best idea to highlight that with those red lines.
It's darker than his shoulder and is kinda making it less dramatic.
Edit, the fact that the natural light of the stock you used is blue, it also doesn't quite work with the red ( from the torso upward ).
Maybe if you'd make artificial red light to replace the blue, it'd look nicer.
Where the light hits his shoulder, I don't think it was the best idea to highlight that with those red lines.
It's darker than his shoulder and is kinda making it less dramatic.
Edit, the fact that the natural light of the stock you used is blue, it also doesn't quite work with the red ( from the torso upward ).
Maybe if you'd make artificial red light to replace the blue, it'd look nicer.
I think the shoulder looks fine as it is. I wasn't going for anything drastic. I agree with the blue light from the torso up though, will make some changes someday