[RATE] First time using renders :3! [RATE]

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• Oct 18, 2010

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hey I usually NEVER use renders so yeah, These are my first two. I made a third but I lost the file ): And yes I've been reading tuts before you say that =/ lol

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I think the second one would look better non-transperant.. ideas?

 

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• Oct 18, 2010

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Kk made another

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Is it that bad that you can't comment, or that good that your speechless? lol

 

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• Oct 18, 2010

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The gap below her elbow on the left side shows a little lighter border, might be some of the original background she was on that you didn't delete, but other then that it's alright for a first try. The edges around her hair show a little of the previous render as well.

 

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• Oct 18, 2010

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Good job for a beginner but when you get better this will look like shit compared to what you make.

 

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• Oct 19, 2010

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Try making them smaller also. (I gave you my other tips on HF. FOLLOW EM!)